Got her consent to use it for a YouTube video

Ive made a few modifications, this is how it stands at the moment;
Surat al Man-Made@Noon1. Verily, this book is unlike any other
2. A clear message for those willing to believe.
3. And have we not told you the story of Khidr?
4. Verily, he was wise and Luqman and Bulayman as well.
5. O Prophet! Tell your women to stay in the homes
6. For verily, it is better for them, if only they knew.
7. And that they should not create undue attention
8. with laughter and talk.
9. And what is like the stars? Shall I strike you a similitude?
10. For the stars are the signs of my mercy and greatness,
11. and they bow to me in worship
12. but remember if her husband dies without issue then half his estate goes to his brothers
13. and her testimony is equal to that of half a man
14. For you shall have fear of the lord and remember well
15. his benevolence. For verily, Allah is all knowing, and all seeing.
16. And those who have patience and who fast gave in to the way of the lord,
17. verily, they shall eat grapes on reclining chairs for ever and ever.
18. But those whose hearts Allah he hath sealed,
19. verily, their faces shall be darkened by molten lead and shall
20. drink boiling sulphur as an everlasting torment, though they cry
21. 'Our lord! We would have believed if you had shown us evidence!'
22. But verily, I did show them but it's too late for them now.
23. Lo, did I not present them with this passage which is clear?