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Reply #60 - August 09, 2010, 01:35 PM

The Universe of the Absurd

I’m stuck between rationality and the mystical
I try to make sense of everything, but everything is nonsensical
I start from the beginning, look for an end
But the universe is infinitely cyclical
I look for a meaning for everything
But the meaning of everything is all just mythical

Rationality to the point of absurdity
And my world falls apart
It crumbles to pieces
Is it the end, or is it the start?

I hang my head between my knees
And break down in despair
Nihilistic and deconstructionist
My thinking was all in vain
Now I have absolutely nothing to lose
And no value to whatever I gain
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Reply #61 - August 09, 2010, 01:40 PM

I like that one Abood, very good indeed! And also Kaffir Latte, pierced_beauty, mighty_cats.

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Reply #62 - August 09, 2010, 01:47 PM

Good one Abood

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Reply #63 - August 09, 2010, 01:52 PM

Quote from: Abood on August 09, 2010, 01:35 PM
The Universe of the Absurd

I’m stuck
no value to whatever I gain

what kind of poem is that abood
neither it is mystical nor it is rational but it is confusion
it sounds like the universe of abood
rationality is mystical and mysticism is rational

Rationality to the point of absurdity is absurdity of abood
But the universe is infinitely cyclical so why worry and why care about universe?
It is after all cyclical, what goes on comes back
You look for a meaning for everything and that is where you are wrong
And the meaning of everything is just mythical so let it go..let it go..

You hang your head between your knees
Did some one beat you up?
breaking down is Ok., but crying is no use
the universe is cyclical, the psychedelic drama continues
Nihilistic and deconstructionist
but deconstructionist is not Nihilistic
and thinking is never invain
you absolutely nothing to lose by thinking
the value thinking is immeasurable and you gain everything abood..

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Reply #64 - August 09, 2010, 02:02 PM

I was inspired partly by this work of art:
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Reply #65 - August 09, 2010, 02:04 PM

Quote from: Abood on August 09, 2010, 02:02 PM
I was inspired partly by this work of art:

(Clicky for piccy!)

That guy need to be bitch slapped and you inspired me to rewrite your poem..

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Reply #66 - August 11, 2010, 11:13 PM

Quote from: Kaffir Latte on August 09, 2010, 12:35 PM
Theres was a young man from Kabul
who thought it would be rather cool
to blow up a building full of women and children
so 72 hoories could play with his tool

Its easy to condemn the young man
for the hurt, the grief and bedlam
cuased by his bomb ,but borne from shameless aplomb
of those who would claim peace = islam

I love the way you think.

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Reply #67 - August 12, 2010, 01:21 AM

Islam is the religion of peace
their fight with the facts will not cease

Their logic is flawed
allah is a fraud
here comes a sword for my neck...
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Reply #68 - August 13, 2010, 04:57 PM

An Ode To Being Dumped

( Subtitled:Fuck you , you insufferable, pretentious cow,I never really liked you anyway.)

You can't take the music from my life
Nor pull my sun down from the sky
No river of tears , no sleepless nights

You can't make my red turn blue
You can't take the music from my life
Becuase I can sing sad songs too

You cant stop my memories from flowing
I remember days when our souls smiled
The secrets shared, tentative souls bared

Seems it wasnt our symphony, just a prelude
You cant stop my memories from flowing
Neither can I , although I wish I could

Today cant stop tomorrow from coming
Just as yesterday couldn't stop your goodbye
Time waits for nothing ,not even itself

It throws me forward, push turns to pull turns to shove
Today wont stop tomorrow from coming
Its already here. WIthout love

No,this won't take the music from my life
Becuase I can sing sad songs too
No this wont take the music from my life
Your dumping me? Fuck you!

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Reply #69 - August 16, 2010, 12:20 PM

The shortest poem in the world

AN ODE TO MY GOLDFISH

Wet.Pet.

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Reply #70 - August 08, 2011, 01:56 AM

I like to write poetry and would like to create a thread where everyone can share their poems.

Here's one of mine:

Motionless: She lay there
waiting
for our soulless anarchy
to stain beige-colored sheets
Every word
evokes animal desire
ridicules platonic love
breaks my humanity
pushes me into primal abyss
Her lust could flip Sodom upside down
But still
her skin
dripped in homage
to the heat
We commenced
Damp hair hung like Spanish moss
swayed to the rhythm of our sin
She broke free with a smile
satiated
we lay together
our minds still faced with eternity
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Reply #71 - August 08, 2011, 02:59 AM

PLEASE USE THE SEARCH FEATURE before posting new threads.

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Reply #72 - August 08, 2011, 03:37 AM

My apologies.
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Reply #73 - August 08, 2011, 04:05 AM

It's okay

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Reply #74 - August 08, 2011, 05:20 AM

Quote from: mighty_cats on August 12, 2010, 01:21 AM
Islam is the religion of peace
their fight with the facts will not cease

Their logic is flawed
allah is a fraud
here comes a sword for my neck...

Oh you.

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Reply #75 - August 10, 2011, 07:59 PM

Snapping Rubber Band

I am going through
the emotions in my life,
As though I am
in autopilot;
Actions
without emotion
or reason.
Words
without meaning
Trapped
in an endless cycle
of press, play and repeat
Without
ever knowing... why

My parents had always
looked at things differently
They raised me
with expectations
that I'll never fulfill,
People
I will never grow to like
Customs and traditions
that will always
seem alien
A way of life
I will never accept...

A rubber band
stretched
beyond reason,
Growing fatigue
due to pressures
from the outside,
And from within its self
Suppressing
any emotions
that will be
undesirable
Feeling increasingly bitter,
with every passing day.

But one day,
I will snap.
I will lie there
limp, lifeless;
a mere
rubber casing
of my former self,
Blood of arsenic,
skin of styrofoam,
Emotions of latex
and a shattered glass soul...

They can try to mend
the broken fragments,
But it will be
utterly useless,
I will be damaged
beyond repair
For once,
they will feel
what I felt,
regret and hopelessness,
Reminiscing
on what could’ve been...

What I could’ve been.

Drifting

I sit here,
watching cars go by
Through my barrier,
wishing,
I can break free and fly

These four walls,
enclose me,
more than a maximum security prison
taunting, teasing
driving me insane

I lay here,
somewhere,
between the real world
and my own

Watching,
trees sway and cars go by
Drifting,
through these anxious moments

These are two of my best poems. My other ones pretty much suck, I'm not all that good at writing but I love to write. Man after I come out to my parents I also kind of have to tell them I want to be a writer instead of an architect, engineer or some other job I will hate and regret for the rest of my life.

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Reply #76 - August 10, 2011, 08:07 PM

Very nice!

I liked this bit the most

Quote
But one day,
I will snap.
I will lie there
limp, lifeless;
a mere
rubber casing
of my former self,
Blood of arsenic,
skin of styrofoam,
Emotions of latex
and a shattered glass soul...
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Reply #77 - August 10, 2011, 08:37 PM

I have taken the liberty to change punctuation of this work:

Snapping Rubber Band

I am going through the emotions in my life, as though I am in autopilot;
Actions without emotion or reason. Words without meaning, Trapped in an endless cycle of press, play and repeat without ever knowing... why my parents had always looked at things differently.
They raised me with expectations that I'll never fulfill,
People I will never grow to like, customs and traditions that will always seem alien, a way of life I will never accept...

A rubber band stretched beyond reason, growing fatigue due to pressures from the outside, and from within its self suppressing any emotions that will be undesirable. Feeling increasingly bitter, with every passing day.

But one day, I will snap. I will lie there, limp, lifeless; a mere rubber casing of my former self, Blood of arsenic, skin of styrofoam, emotions of latex and a shattered glass soul...

They can try to mend the broken fragments, but it will be utterly useless, I will be damaged beyond repair. For once, they will feel what I felt, regret and hopelessness, reminiscing on what could’ve been... what I could’ve been.

In this form I think the story is much more impressive. Only now, it's regarded as proza. Maybe I prefer the proza over the "poem" this time. Well done, impressive!

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Reply #78 - August 11, 2011, 11:53 AM

Quote from: serrated_colon on August 08, 2010, 04:15 PM
this is more of a rap that i wrote 2 years ago, it was mostly for a battle

You're like a hopeless dreamer, staring in divine light,
You suffer from hindsight from this assigned fight,
Your bars are benign, while I recite malign shite,
You're alligned to the sidelines, you're just a fleabite;
I'm on my feet like a feline, rolling in the twilight,
I designed the guideline, you can't get it timed right,
Infinite crimes I indict, hip-hop in daylight;
My lyrics define and refine - highlight the limelight.

I'm the cashmere to your linen - much to your disdain,
I jeer at your fear, I'm ruling your domain,
The final frontier, the feigned membrane
of society's queer mundane monarch reign;
Revere the shakesperean bloodstain, inane pain,
Lyrics restrained, appear to be insane,
To the naked ear, profanity remains;
For my homies' peer, my melody regains.

You fucking pusssies down under were torn asunder,
You're rap is a blunder while I spit fucking thunder,
When you spit a bar I wonder, should I fucking shun ya,
I'm suddenly getting plundered while my lyrics fucking gun ya.

Yeah I'm gettin' plundered, by your bitch you see,
Poetic and metaphorically by my wizardy,
Philosophically fucking her like it's Paizuri,
Mammary copulation 'cos you fuck her flaccidly.

You're embalmed in my theology, like tutankhamun,
My sadistic bars expand on me, they're like a typhoon,
Utilising sublime logic, to which you're immune,
You're neurotically inferior, the mass to my commune,
Psychologically spoon-feeding you my monsoon,
Of musically enchanced barrage of impugn,
"Lyrically challanged" eight-bar platoons,
I'm spittin' harpoons from the moons of neptune.

Okay I need to hear you rap this NAO.

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Reply #79 - September 12, 2011, 01:20 AM

FREESTYLE STRAIGHT FROM THE CHAT YO

02:13   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: Abuddha: IS A HOE
02:14   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: WHO FUCKED A DOE
02:14   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: NICE AND SLOW
02:14   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: THEN HAD TO GO
02:14   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: FUCK YO MAMA
02:14   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: IN THE BAHAMAS
02:15   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: AND PENETRATE HER LIKE GAMMA
02:15   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: RAYS
02:15   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: IN YOUR FACE
02:15   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: KNOW YOUR PLACE
02:15   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: IN YOUR INFERIOR RACE
02:15   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: OF RETARDS Abuddha
02:15   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: YOU FUCKING DISGRACE

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Reply #80 - September 12, 2011, 01:25 AM

Such a poet
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Reply #81 - September 12, 2011, 01:41 AM

Why thank you. I try.

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Reply #82 - September 12, 2011, 01:45 AM

Darkness
Brooding hate
I feel
Blackness
Terrible fate
I am
Dark, suffering, joyless
Life
Death is better
Because Death
Is without judgement
Death is better
because
I am
No more

*cuts wrist*

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Reply #83 - September 12, 2011, 01:45 AM

Emo Jesus

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Reply #84 - September 12, 2011, 02:25 AM

Quote from: Jesus Christ on September 12, 2011, 01:45 AM
Darkness
Brooding hate
I feel
Blackness
Terrible fate
I am
Dark, suffering, joyless
Life
Death is better
Because Death
Is without judgement
Death is better
because
I am
No more

*cuts wrist*

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Reply #85 - September 12, 2011, 03:14 AM

Quote from: Jema on August 11, 2011, 11:53 AM
Okay I need to hear you rap this NAO.

+1
Quote from: Jema on September 12, 2011, 01:20 AM
FREESTYLE STRAIGHT FROM THE CHAT YO

02:13   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: Abuddha: IS A HOE
02:14   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: WHO FUCKED A DOE
02:14   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: NICE AND SLOW
02:14   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: THEN HAD TO GO
02:14   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: FUCK YO MAMA
02:14   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: IN THE BAHAMAS
02:15   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: AND PENETRATE HER LIKE GAMMA
02:15   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: RAYS
02:15   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: IN YOUR FACE
02:15   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: KNOW YOUR PLACE
02:15   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: IN YOUR INFERIOR RACE
02:15   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: OF RETARDS Abuddha
02:15   <FUCKINGSUSPENSE>: YOU FUCKING DISGRACE

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Reply #86 - September 12, 2011, 03:18 AM

Quote from: 7amzah on September 12, 2011, 02:25 AM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RUi54JTgL5s&ob=av2n

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Reply #87 - September 12, 2011, 02:13 PM

Quote from: Naija Infidel on September 12, 2011, 03:14 AM

Let a son of adam try to imitate my style and intricate rhyming scheme. Many will try to produce something like it. All will fail. If you are in doubt as to my lyrical prophethood, then produce a freestyle like it, and call on your helper, besides Allah, if you are truthful

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Reply #88 - September 12, 2011, 05:06 PM

Nice one!!, i like that.

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Reply #89 - September 12, 2011, 05:09 PM

Quote from: 7amzah on September 12, 2011, 02:25 AM
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RUi54JTgL5s&ob=av2n

DAMMMN... Simple Plan!! So many memories, you have nooo idea!! I get nostalgic every time I listen to them.
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