ExHijabi great blog! I really need to learn how to write properly :p
Teach me!
hahaha, I would make a terrible teacher! I'm too impatient. But thank you

Yes, write! More people should write.
Good work. You are able to convey the emotion via the actions, precisely as you wish to. Your audience is with you.
thank you so much, three. I always look forward to your comments.
I won't post it publicly on the forum, but I can PM you the link if you would want to read it.

I am also working on publishing it via amazon's free indie publishing site. It will be published under a pen name.
https://www.createspace.com/Yes! Please PM it to me if it isn't too much trouble. I do want to read it.