I think the speech bubble is still too small. You should scale it up and let it cover a bit of his shoulder and also let it go into the outer black frame a bit. Make the thing readable, man!
![grin12](https://www.councilofexmuslims.com/Smileys/custom/grin12.gif)
Edit: Oh, it actually doesn't need to cover his shoulder. But the speech bubble can definitely grow a bit more.