NPS: Ness Poem Skool

OP - April 24, 2010, 02:54 PM

Ok, here we get to learn poeming! Afro

under a close supervision by the one and only, Nessrin.

Whose first?

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Reply #2 - April 24, 2010, 07:54 PM

Twinkle twinkle poor little Jihad
Don't you know that killing is bad?
In the name of a god who is always mad?
The Mullahs have convinced you, that's just sad

Twinkle twinkle poor little Moe
You're proud of your name, but you just don't know
That it's after a man, whose intentions were so so
Who prayed on little girls, don't you know?

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Reply #4 - April 24, 2010, 08:05 PM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jm81rd7MEZs

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7J4YrUCSFSs

One day.. Some day.. I hope to see and read many nessrriinns.. many allats and and many Ephemerals ...Singing all at once..

"Some day All women of the planet decide for themselves
what they want to be without Allah book fingering their lives since their birth"

Do not let silence become your legacy.. Question everything

I renounced my faith to become a kafir,
the beloved betrayed me and turned in to a Muslim

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Reply #6 - April 24, 2010, 08:48 PM

here here.. hear hear!..

islam has replaced the race of knowledge
spending their money on building a wedge
between themselves and the rest..
their skies are watched by the unblessed..
they ignore the marvelous universe
summing this life up to just a verse
while they sit and wait for death
playing a role of macbeth..
the cosmos steal everyone's breath
the stars dance ballet
expanding in a brilliant display..
who will you turn to dear muslims..
when a star stops dancing..
and to earth it starts advancing..
who will warn you to stay alive..
before the star arrives..
they are the unblessed..
their love for humans to thrive...
yet you deprive them to survive..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NV9vdUjuWxc

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Reply #8 - April 24, 2010, 09:00 PM

DawahWorks, I remember him,
Musalman who reads the Quran in street-style rhymin
His smirks and his smile
Id so love to defile

He's a good muslim you see
Always proudly wearing his black tohpee
But behind your back he'll scoff
In between his breaths, continually slaging everyone off,

Later on piously you'll see him prayin'

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.
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What a slimey hypocrite, Im Just Sayin' Wink

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Reply #10 - April 24, 2010, 09:05 PM

Quote from: nessrriinn on April 24, 2010, 08:59 PM

i just re read that.. hmm i just might edit it a bit and use it for a post..
any suggestions??

It reads good to me, but either way, its your voice that makes your poems fly Afro

Its performance / protest / poets art.

"we can smell traitors and country haters"

Quote from: arX on May 01, 2011, 03:33 AM

God is Love.
Love is Blind. Stevie Wonder is blind. Therefore, Stevie Wonder is God.

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Reply #12 - April 24, 2010, 09:24 PM

Quote from: IsLame on April 24, 2010, 09:00 PM

DawahWorks, I remember him,
Musalman who reads the Quran in street-style rhymin
His smirks and his smile
Id so love to defile

He's a good muslim you see
Always proudly wearing his black tohpee
But behind your back he'll scoff
In between his breaths, continually slaging everyone off,

Later on piously you'll see him prayin'

.
.
.

What a slimey hypocrite, Im Just Sayin' Wink

That was great Islame! Afro

"The more I study religions the more I am convinced that man never worshiped anything but himself."
~Sir Richard Francis Burton

"I think religion is just like smoking: Both invented by people, addictive, harmful, and kills!"
~RIBS

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Reply #14 - April 24, 2010, 09:29 PM

Hey al you non-rhyming folk in this thread
Remember only poetry here,
Or your dead Headsman

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Reply #16 - April 24, 2010, 11:29 PM

Hey wow great

"we can smell traitors and country haters"

Quote from: arX on May 01, 2011, 03:33 AM

God is Love.
Love is Blind. Stevie Wonder is blind. Therefore, Stevie Wonder is God.

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Reply #18 - April 24, 2010, 11:36 PM

Wonderful Poem Ness

Your poems are filled with goodness

My feeble attempt at poetry. Islame, open up the oven, I am going on death row Cheesy

"The more I study religions the more I am convinced that man never worshiped anything but himself."
~Sir Richard Francis Burton

"I think religion is just like smoking: Both invented by people, addictive, harmful, and kills!"
~RIBS

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Reply #20 - April 25, 2010, 04:50 AM

You have staggering depth in writing poetry. And that is the MOST depressing sonnet I ever heard about Islam dear nessrriinn...

Do not let silence become your legacy.. Question everything

I renounced my faith to become a kafir,
the beloved betrayed me and turned in to a Muslim

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Reply #22 - May 04, 2010, 05:10 AM

Again, like always, great poem Ness

"The more I study religions the more I am convinced that man never worshiped anything but himself."
~Sir Richard Francis Burton

"I think religion is just like smoking: Both invented by people, addictive, harmful, and kills!"
~RIBS

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Reply #24 - May 04, 2010, 09:34 PM

Quote from: nessrriinn on May 04, 2010, 03:36 AM

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aDJblk0jgHA
imagine that..

One of the best poems/videos you made, if not THE best.

I totally loved it. Afro

"In every time and culture there are pressures to conform to the prevailing prejudices. But there are also, in every place and epoch, those who value the truth; who record the evidence faithfully. Future generations are in their debt." -Carl Sagan

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Reply #26 - May 12, 2010, 12:42 PM

The nectar
has
turned
sour

I would not say bitter for it was once sweet

What strange fruit
I would beckon
at first nothing stirs in the deep abyss of my well
a prayer, would
drop
like a, coin

and then, splash

.
..
...

So the spirit stirs
and spirals up

So it reaches my throat
and I cry out,

"My Lord, My Lord"

Am I now to steal a prayer like a thief in the night?
Unlatch the hatch, Unpick the lock
I stand at your doorway

Would I ever have hesitated in the past?
Would I have not fallen down in prostration?
Choking on my tears indebted to you a miserly beggar in gratitude

They say
Thy all-encompassing love was mine
all along

And I wonder.

My heart shudders

Was I blinded by my own tears?

Should I rejoice?

For my Love was great

Cruel irony of life;

my mistresses' sly smile
partially enshrouded in darkness

Have I now paved my road?

Will you spectate?

Does the shrillness of my agonized voice turn you away?

I still have no fear in my heart. For what does it matter?

If you are good, you are good

If you are evil, you are vile

If you do not exist…

I stop and reflect, and think of the outside world

And I do not see you. I look at my brothers and sisters

in pain. And I am mute.

I have no answers.

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