(Points will be deducted upon reference to grammatical structure.)
2 points deducted for that sentence alone.
I was on a little Caribbean island, sitting in the verandah of the local shop/bar.
The news was garbled at first, as much speculation as hard fact. My ex-girlfriend called from London to say that there were rumours of Canary Wharf being blown up as well.
We sat there all day listening to the news and drinking beer.
I thought it might be the moment America, a young nation, started growing up. I was wrong, sadly. It took me a long time to realise quite how many people had died and quite how awfully.
It was in the year after 9/11 that hijabs started appearing in numbers on the streets of London, and I realised then that it was going to be a long, hard fight - a fight that the Iraq war only made longer and harder.