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  • Poetry... I guess.
     OP - August 16, 2014, 10:48 PM
    The misery and despair of being the bear of joy.

    My first memory was of a boy whose joy seeped through his bloody hands, he sewed my nose on, he dragged me in agony, screaming angrily that the world is filled with nothing but pain and men who were insane
    but I knew deep in my heart
    he was wrong.

    My next memory was of another boy skipping merrily towards me his joy giving me hope, to secretly gloat that the Chinese boy was wrong, he wanted me, he need me, he loved me, the grand power of three, what every teddy bear wants
    I came home with the boy whose joy made made me happy, I loved the boy named Lee and he loved me.

    The years went by in haste, and our love faded at an alarming pace, I became a ghost perched on his bed wishing I was now dead, I cut a slot for my mouth and cotton and pain came out, I stole a bottle and went full throttle on the beer cursing anyone I ever held dear.

    One day when the sun beamed and his eyes gleamed, for the first time in years he looked in my direction
    then pulled out his erection
    he stuffed it in my mouth and my seams tore as he called me a dirty whore, I was in pain, and he thrusted in and out again he gasped and toppled over,
    finally
    My mouth filled with his love, my cotton no longer the colour of a dove.
    This is my life now, no reason to fight, the little chinese boy was right, life is not fair, I am no longer the bear of joy, instead I am the bear of misery and despair.
    Kill me now.
    Build a man a fire, and he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. - Terry Pratchett
  • Poetry... I guess.
     Reply #1 - August 16, 2014, 11:12 PM
    Wow!  Very powerful and graphic.

    P.S. Don't die.

    Also, are you gay?
    No free mixing of the sexes is permitted on these forums or via PM or the various chat groups that are operating.

    Women must write modestly and all men must lower their case.

    http://www.ummah.com/forum/showthread.php?425649-Have-some-Hayaa-%28modesty-shame%29-people!
  • Poetry... I guess.
     Reply #2 - August 16, 2014, 11:36 PM
    Wow, nice poem.  Afro
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    Let's Play Chess!

    harakaat, friend, RIP
  • Poetry... I guess.
     Reply #3 - August 17, 2014, 12:30 AM
    Wow. That was truly breathtaking.
  • Poetry... I guess.
     Reply #4 - August 17, 2014, 01:41 AM
    Incredibly powerful poem. Do you mind if I add it to this thread?

    http://www.councilofexmuslims.com/index.php?topic=25116.0
    `But I don't want to go among mad people,' Alice remarked.
     `Oh, you can't help that,' said the Cat: `we're all mad here. I'm mad.  You're mad.'
     `How do you know I'm mad?' said Alice.
     `You must be,' said the Cat, `or you wouldn't have come here.'
  • Poetry... I guess.
     Reply #5 - August 17, 2014, 07:17 AM
    Quote from: Jedi on August 16, 2014, 11:12 PM
    Wow!  Very powerful and graphic.

    P.S. Don't die.

    Also, are you gay?

    Thank you, also don't worry I won't die, and secondly no, I am not gay.
    Quote from: asbie on August 16, 2014, 11:36 PM
    Wow, nice poem.  Afro

    Thank you.

    Sure Quod, go ahead.
    Build a man a fire, and he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. - Terry Pratchett
  • Poetry... I guess.
     Reply #6 - August 17, 2014, 08:40 AM
    Did you write it or do I need to credit another source?
    `But I don't want to go among mad people,' Alice remarked.
     `Oh, you can't help that,' said the Cat: `we're all mad here. I'm mad.  You're mad.'
     `How do you know I'm mad?' said Alice.
     `You must be,' said the Cat, `or you wouldn't have come here.'
  • Poetry... I guess.
     Reply #7 - August 17, 2014, 08:42 AM
    I wrote it.
    Build a man a fire, and he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. - Terry Pratchett
  • Poetry... I guess.
     Reply #8 - August 17, 2014, 03:56 PM
    Love it  Smiley
  • Poetry... I guess.
     Reply #9 - August 17, 2014, 04:27 PM
    Wow.. That was amazing! Although I feel obliged to ask; is this poem a manifestation of real events?
    "Religion is regarded by the common people as true, by the wise as false, and by the rulers as useful."
  • Poetry... I guess.
     Reply #10 - August 17, 2014, 04:30 PM
    I'm a bit slow to understand things too, have to read over again and again to absorb, but  thought it was pretty powerful..

  • Poetry... I guess.
     Reply #11 - August 18, 2014, 09:10 AM
    Thank you very much for the compliments you guys.
    Quote from: Yuppy on August 17, 2014, 04:27 PM
    Wow.. That was amazing! Although I feel obliged to ask; is this poem a manifestation of real events?

    No worries it is not about me, but yes it is a manifestation of real events, but I found it uncomfortable using her directly for the poem so I decided to make it about a teddy bear to distance the poem from her and to inject some dark humour to the poem.
    Build a man a fire, and he'll be warm for a day. Set a man on fire, and he'll be warm for the rest of his life. - Terry Pratchett
  • Poetry... I guess.
     Reply #12 - August 18, 2014, 10:59 AM
    ^it's stunning, i enjoy black humour, please share more if you have.   
  • Poetry... I guess.
     Reply #13 - August 18, 2014, 11:02 AM
    This is really powerful. Thank you for sharing this.
    I'd love to read some more, if you wrote any...
    The future is full of thrilling possibilities.
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